…her home was devasted long time ago and the last parts of nature she saw were just rotten trees… after a long journey she found the paradise, she only knows from narrations. Her home was devasted long time ago and the last parts of nature she saw were just rotten trees.
blender 2.62 cycles render (50 samples 45min [5,7k ]) postpro and textures done with gimp
german wip thread:
As crits, the water tank has texturing problems, it deserved a painted texture for sure. And also, for the closeup area, some modeled stones/bricks would have been worth it, instead of relying on texturing.
The environment is great and really adds to the mood. My only crit is maybe add some worn/dirt to her clothes or backpack I think it would be a nice touch and would add more personality and belonging.
I like everything exept the characters. I feel they are too stiff in the poses, and too clean.
When I´m hiking with my dog we inevitably get dirty. Both of us. Now she looks like a girl on her way to school.
Regarding poses I think she should have more weight on the fence, stretching towards her goal (the ocean?). And the dog standing with its body in the same direction as her (suggesting they have done this travel together, and that it is not a strange dog she just met), but turning its head towards her (and implying: is this it, is this our goal?).
Just a suggestion.
The rest of the image is great.
Hey, after a short break i worked a bit on that image again. I added some more minor stuff (like grass and a blender newspaper ) and fixed also a few things like the pose of the lady
Here is the finally final image of “finally…” also four detailshots out of the 5,6k rendering!