Tell me what will bring this animation to life. I want to tell a story and do not want to spend to much time on one scene. I can't get help on it so I want move on but before I do I want to learn what would make you want to keep watching.
Things I plan to do.
#1 put lots of sounds in the trash.
#2 add clutter and things to the scenes.
#3 Fix the intro I'm not sure what I can do I'm using Blender render.
#4 write and add script.
#5 next scene is a fight with the spider.
Anything you want to suggest is OK. This video is about the best I can do in a reasonable amount of time.
I would like to learn how to make a good alien voice.
Thanks for any and all replays.
Ive posted this video before but did not plan on asking for help with it. This is the first video I have made where I could not see what to do to fix it ( or could not see many many things that needed fixing )