Coffee (My First Project)

Here is a nice morning cuppa joe.
This is my first “serious” rendering.

The sample count isn’t very high, the cookies stink at a close up view, and the message on the cup is dumb and cheesy.

But, given that, I’d like some criticism on what to improve.
Full image here
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You may want to add a little more detail to the coffee surface, just some of the brown foam that is usually floating on top.

Another thought may be to add a few signs of use, like scratches or rough spots on the wooden surface or coffee/saliva residue on the mug where someone has just taken a sip.
Continue what you have started with the crumbs, add more character! :eyebrowlift:

Thanks for the input, will do. :slight_smile:

Nice setup, maybe shift the view to the side a little to use the rule of thirds.