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·WhisperSix·
 tools:Photoshop subject:Critique Hours:6 This is an illustration of a character I call whisper six.Lost color when saving in .jpg format.I was going to put in light halos and deaper shadows within the background But I'm calling it Fin for now.All critique is welcome.. |
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30-Jan-05, 06:29
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You know what? I thought Your avatar is rendered
 and concerning the whole... if you did it on layers, try to work out the bg more, maybe gt rid of the smears and make more slight color variations...? (i'm no specialist) Yeonil |
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#2
31-Jan-05, 05:17
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Not bad... I like the color choice. However, for the the figure, I'd recommend at least hinting at elbow and wrist joints. I know his arms are supposed to be straight, but I've only seen arms that straight and rectangular when they're nailed between two 2x4's.
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#3
31-Jan-05, 14:48
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Hey thanks for the feed back.Your right ,The lighting on his left arm is bugging me.I'll apply elbow and wrist definition and smoke comming from the pistols.Thanks agian and sorry for the long loading .png format but that was the only decent enought format for saving some quality.
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[color=grey][size=2]·WhisperSix·[/size] • [size=2]·AAGUN·[/size][/color] |
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#4
01-Feb-05, 03:38
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the coat is too lost in detail, i think you should simplify it a bit more, loose all the minor creases and light it a bit more dynaimcally, it looks very flat, its hard to see the roundness of it.
comments about posture above are also valid, it'd be a cool pic with a bit more work...
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F is for fire that burns down the whole town U is for uranium.... bombs! N is for no survivors |
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#5
02-Feb-05, 05:24
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