Hi,
here’s a new little scene by me…
I’m still a beginner, but I would be really happy about
criticism to improve it:)
Cool!
But I’m a bit lost to where the camera focus is. It seems to be neither the front stone, nor the sea start.
Also, you are using more than one light source, right? The front stone seems to have at least 3 shadows. I think this gives a studio lighting impression (just commenting).
Thanks for your feedback!
I improved the scene a little bit by changing the lightning (only 1 light source now) and adding some grass.
Criticism is still wished.
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Is the rock the focus point?
Yes, the stone and the front pieces of the right grass are focused.
nice work
and you could try to concentrace on keylighting
and add more interesting things like lighthouse,clous and ships
Thanks for commenting!
Did many changes, replaced boat, grass, sand texture and added some more objects.
Tell me what you think about it:)
I recommend you try to use a one sun lamp. You can rotate it by pressing “r”. And you can try to better match the scale of objects. Now, the star in foreground seems be too big relative to the boat. If you want to achieve a perspective effect, set the objects closer or further of the camera. Add some specular to the materials, they are too rough.
