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Artwork Focused Critiques
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Hey Everybody!
Here is an old work I recently came back to. It is abstract and not meant to have a story of any kind. Please critique :slight_smile:

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-Blender2003

2

I would like to see some stars in a vortex pattern in the background.

3

Hey! Thanks so much for your comment.
Here is a version with some stars/snow/dust/something floating :slight_smile:

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4

Looks better.But i would like to see the whole thing with orbits.And probably other people would as well.

5

Hey!
Thanks for your comment.
What do you mean by the whole thing with orbits?
Do you man orbits around the stars?

6

Orbits around the star.

7

If its atom I would reccomend puting other atomdms insted of stars. Maby a little blurred out.

8

From what i can see you have 3 electrines here which means that its some kind of lithium, metal that is. You coul add a bit metalic look to core if its not in the way of your concept.