Floating Islands feedback

Artwork Focused Critiques
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I made this image using Blender for a contest. I modeled everything myself, and did some research on how to do the vignette in the compositor. I want to make a video of it, the birds flying across the camera and monkeys swinging on the vines. That will probably have to wait until I can get a better graphics card. I am still a beginner at this, so I would love some feedback on what I could have done better.

Final Floating Islands Pegasus.jpg1152×648 149 KB

Thank you!

2

Modeling looks quite good, but you must improve the lighting! Add a big bright light source to create shadows and highlights and add a big light source from the back to create rim light. Then adjust the levels in photoshop or gimp to get more contrast. It will look a lot better.

3

Ok, Thank you!