Animation Critque

Hey all,
Sadly I do not have enough time to render this animation, here’s how it would have looked like:




This animation was made for a weekly contest:

Id love to hear some feedback, always looking to improve! Feel free to be Brutally honest. I’m especially looking for advice on core/fundamentals and stuff I may have missed.

Unlike the knee popping ;(

Cheers!

You definitely have talent and up until 46 seconds it feels like there is intention behind everything , then the weird out bending over backwards thing happens and it gets sporadic and jumpy after that . I feel you should see him being approached with the knife from behind whilst he’s picking up the pendent because it jumps to him being patted on the back when your still thinking “cool he has just kicked ass”. The animation is good though , the characters feel like they have weight which is usually one of the most difficult to convey.

Good work.