Home office with Roman Blinds

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Here’s another render of a room designed to promote the window blind. This will be featured on a website and the blind will change colour and pattern based on user interaction which is why it is quite plain to start with. Colours range from white to black with many neutral colours in between.

All materials are PBR and all models are built from scratch from reference photos. The floor materials are from http://poliigon.com/

Please let me know if you like it and where I can improve it.

Thanks in advance!

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Looks pretty good. I think the biggest thing it could use is lighting that is less uniform. It may mean you loose some of the definition in those beautiful details you worked hard on, but you’re selling blinds after all, not books. The computer display, while very cool, may need to go because it commands a lot of attention in the composition.