Two dices on a ludo game board
I like it the dice and the game part, very nice
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for a start, the lighting of your sceneis quite bad. you could try maybe a single light from the back of the image and an overhead lamp.
also the composition of your scene is quite bad too.
You should look at the rule of thirds, it is really useful and easy to execute…
Also you should try doing a low camera shot, close to the table with a DOF. It would be a good idea to add a window in the background and that could work as another solution to your lighting solution.
The materials are good and so is the idea.
keep up the good work