Hello Blenderartists
Can you tell me whats good and whats bad about my ray gun.
Thanks
Hi,
Nice gun, I like your concept.
There are however some point to improve .
The modeling looks good although it seems that you used a subsurf modifier on your whole model. This is something I did as well, but it result in models that are overly smooth.
You could smooth several parts of your model, but try to mostly do so called ‘hard surface modeling’ without a sub-surf modifier.
When you have done this you might also want to add some more detail to your model.
For the texturing;
Could you maybe post a render of your work? The screenshot you send is rather gritty. Nevertheless your texture could also be less smooth and monotone. Try adding scratches, bump, signs of weathering etc.
This is a tutorial you might find usefull for this: