Okay, the animation is slow and there’s not enough movement outside of that of the main character. However, even with the main character’s animation, it’s floaty at best. For example, the time frames starting at the 1:07 mark, it’s moving pretty slow. At the 1:19 mark, the movement becomes even more odd is the head is bouncing, but it’s not moving with the rest of the body. It feels like it’s floating. At the 1:53 mark, as well as the 58 second mark, the animation seems to be really moving in slow motion. Too many sound effects playing as well as a lack of a plot, even for a short, some how makes this animation seem worst than the last one you made from my opinion.
Thankyou so much for your feed back
i will try to improve my self in feature