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In this work after Norton I want a improve my skill: detailed sculpting, render setting, the hair and e.t.c. And yet this WIP! And yeah! I wanna make for my new work a rig! And I wanna see your critics and offers.

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You went into microdetail (skin pores) too early, while you should work on the slightly larger details first. The corner of the eye is sloppy, for example.
General shape looks right (first and second image).

About corner of the eye, you mean rotate eye? Or what? I just dont fully understand…

The outer corner where the upper eyelid meets the lower eyelid. There should be a small fold / overlap, not just a smooth transistion.
It looks ok from the far, but not in the closeup.

I see that almost no one makes secondary forms in the skin, There are veins, and muscles, and fat deposits, and old scars, big folds of skin, expression marks etc… you can just go with a smooth surface on the skin and just make pores, it won’t feel right unless it is a 5-month-old baby.

Oh, I understood, thanks! I fixing it.

Okay, I trying change something in skin, yeah, thanks for the advice!

Oh yeah, how make this line under eyeball?


you have to create a separated mesh and give it a nice water material.

Im back! I remake detail sculpt. And little bit work on SSS. But I dont like lips… And about hair what you say?






And 1 test render with HDR