First movie - Skrible

My first movie is called Skrible. It’s at https://www.dropbox.com/s/cyynlubsfge97sn/Skrible%20Full%20Frame.avi?dl=0 and is 15 minutes long. What do you think? Update - The full version can be found at https://youtu.be/u8-6CPWFTfI and shows a 16-minute length.

Okay, the animation looks great, visuals and textures are great, however, what was lost to me was the story itself. I was able to get that this lonely polygon came across a tint of color, but the reason why the king is hoarding the visible spectrum was never explained. The oppression which lead to the revolt was captured, but that was it. You have to be careful when you create a plot. When you have more than one situation in an animation, you have to be sure that both can be explained and resolved when you get to the end. Also, I would suggest that you upload it to another video sharing site like YouTube or Vimeo. The video abruptly stopped saying that the preview could not be viewed for some reason.

Thanks for the feedback! I added a link based on YouTube as you suggested (https://youtu.be/u8-6CPWFTfI). Seems when I try the dropbox link, I get the same preview message, then can click play and see the rest. Go figure…

Nice work, I left a comment on the youtube video.

nice animation :slight_smile: and long. Great.