Abandoned Mine


This is my latest scene. It is an old abandoned mine entrance with an old mining town in the distance. I am looking for critique as well as ideas/suggestions on how to proceed next. Thanks!

EDIT: Unfortunately BA won’t let me upload the version without compositing. :o

The tree looks a little bit too sparse and regular (looks like one of those tree cell phone towers), and you should probably make the carts a little less identical. I like how they’re warped, but they’re all warped in the same way. That just strikes me as a little odd. Maybe consider adding a bit of vignette, it’ll increase realism, and make the mine look more dark in the bottom right corner.

Overall, looks pretty good!

Generally, just add imperfections and variations on the carts, the rock and make the tree denser or less evenly spaced (try doubling the number of branches on the second level, adding a little bit of segment splitting, and branch length variation.)