Aquatic flower scene

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Hi people,

This is my first nature scene. Can you please give me some feedback? There is something I don´t like but I can´t tell what it is!
It was done with blender 2.78c, cycles, 750 samples.

Thanks a million!
Gabriel.

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I would first work on the shader of the flowers. Is there somewhere an add-node in it? If so, change it to mix-node. (never use the add-node, only with the volume shaders).
The shader of the grass is a bit better, but that doesn’t seem to have fresnell.

Then you can add also some texture in the flower, for example the green part doesn’t show much detail, like nerves, spots, and the like.

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Thank robwesseling. There is no add-node on the flower shader actually, but I agree the petals need more details, I just need to learn how to do it :frowning:
You r right, the grass has no fresnell…again not sure how or when to use it.

Thanks again!
G.