River Bank

River bank scene

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looks like a pretty good start. the tone on the wood of the boat is kind of bright for wood that sits in the dater all the time . and it seems like the shadows are off . the sun has set but the inside and back of the boat are fully illuminated.

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Also, looks like the river runs at the top of a hill, what doesn’t happen in the nature. The rivers usualy runs in the valleys. A few montains or trees in the background just to show that there’s ground behind the grass would do the trick.

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Horizon line! Your scene says it’s up top maybe even out of frame… your sky says it’s maybe a third from the top. This disconnect is giving the on-a-hill illusion. I think if you can balance this and add some focal point of interest that makes the boat tell me a story, this image could be a lot stronger. Why is that boat there? Who tied it up? Did he/she leave something or a mark? Story draws you in and takes a technical exercise into something that gets people’s attention.

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