Bug CGI Composite

Artwork Focused Critiques
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Hi! My name is Jonathan Deese and I’ve been working on creating as real as possible Visual Effects that I can add to Live-Action Footage.

I’ve been staring at my render trying to figure out how I could further improve it. My goal is to make a feature with sized up insects, but to make the composites as realistic as I can.

In this scene I Camera Mapped my kitchen and have a sphere with an Emissions Shader.

I do know I’ve had trouble with finding the right Materials for both Insects as well as textures.

Suggestions/Critiques?

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Hey, it looks great! I really like the story the image tells.

The only thing that really jumps out at me is the weight of the scene. It’s weighted much more to the left, and the right is mostly black.

Okay, so there are two things. I would lengthen the insect just a little.

Overall really good work!