Mcclaren mp4-12c

Artwork Focused Critiques
1

this is my first car model, and i would really appreciate any feedback i can get on the modelling.
I have not gotten much feedback in any other post i’ve done, so i have decided to put it here.
Rip it apart if you like!

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2

and some more

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mclaren-mp4-12 render 51(b) HQ (WALL) .jpg1920×1080 387 KB


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3

last one:

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4

The overall model is very bumpy. Can you post a wire-frame and then I can make some suggestions?

5

sorry for the late reply, normal life got in the way.
anyway, hope this helps:

mclaren-mp4-12 render 56(w) HQ .jpg1920×1080 378 KB

6

and this:

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