One soldier could not resist…
This render just looks random, What am I supposed to look at??
I’ve seen your work here before I made an account and always wanted to say I really love it! It’s like what a surrealism artist from back in the day would make if they had they had the same tools we have.
The details are great, but the overall composition is a mess. Before your next project, do a little sketch on the render window with the grease pencil. I think you’ll find the resulting image will be a lot easier to read.
Really solidly surreal though. The hard shadows and minimal GI which would ruin a normal picture instead add to the stark madness of the scene.
Hey thanks for your comments and crits 
As to what to look at, just get into this world
and look around at everything - it’s fun!
And as for compositional mess, this was totally
intentional. There are many stories going on at
the same time here - just like life, messy yes?
The things that really stick out are the overly bright beach balls and the very low-res ground (the latter looking like a placeholder that was never removed).
The random lensflares also seem to stick out, with some rework and reorganizing, this could become something decent while remaining weird.