shiyan_lin
(shiyan lin)
September 26, 2017, 8:19am
1
Hi
It is a modeling practice to build up my skills for doing archviz work in blender
The texture comes from poliigon.com
the white sofa books and trees outside comes from the blenderguru architecture academy courses
The rests were modeled by myself
Any Critique are very much welcomed
I’ll really appreciate to hear what you think about it,your suggestion will be really helpful
I found out 2 mistakes I made in this render
1.the books on the round table not properly arranged.
2.The flame in the FirePlace looks kinda fake,but I don’t know how to make it looks more natural
If you find out what I’m doing wrong,please point out with no hesitate.
Thank you very much
The close-up of snowball flower
WeakFredo
(WeakFredo)
September 29, 2017, 12:50pm
2
The ribs on the vaulted ceiling (far left) are sticking out.
The fireplace is missing an ornament on the right side.
It’s a beautiful render. But I think the direct light is too strong. More GI.
Try an off center camera
Oskar-A
(Oskar-A)
October 1, 2017, 8:58am
3
Citing BlenderGuru: “Don’t have artificial lights turned on in a daylight scene”. It looks weird.
shiyan_lin
(shiyan lin)
October 5, 2017, 12:53am
4
WeakFredo:
The ribs on the vaulted ceiling (far left) are sticking out.
The fireplace is missing an ornament on the right side.
It’s a beautiful render. But I think the direct light is too strong. More GI.
Try an off center camera
I agree with you about the lightning should be improved
I have a question about Off Center Camera, I can not quite understand what you mean
Thank you very much for your reply
Thumbs up!
shiyan_lin
(shiyan lin)
October 5, 2017, 12:54am
5
Lol, It does look weired, Andrew is correct!
Thank you very much for the critques!
WeakFredo
(WeakFredo)
October 5, 2017, 12:56pm
6
Sorry I meant that a camera angle right down the middle can usually be improved if you move it a little left or right. A little down is sometimes a big improvement also.