Potatoes and Tomatoes

Doing this for a competition in the Blender Discord themed “potato”. Critique needed.


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Love the work and colors

Awesome work!
I would recommend some weathering on the wood (scratches, bumps, batter up the edges a bit etc.) just to give the stand its own “story” and a used feel.

Looks great, but I think tomatoes need more gloss and less blueish shade. Now they look like radishes.

Beautiful composition and great variations on the food position and textures.

My subjective analysis (feel free to disagree or disregard):

Tomatoes could be smoother, shinier. Potatoes could be less saturated. The image overall could be brighter.

Also there is a dominant blue/green tint that, for me, works against the healthiness of the fresh food.

I also think some slight DOF could help here.

I tried incorporating these suggestions into an image for your review:

I hope some of this information has been helpful.

I wish you the best with your project!

Thanks for the comments everyone, not sure why this is getting so much attention. I posted this in November in 2017. Nonetheless, I really appreciate your feedback. Thanks!