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    Cartoon character - Male

    Been working on this for a while, but im not sure how its turning out, may need to go back and work the comp out.
    C&C always welcome.

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    This reminds me of the character Dr Nefario from Despicable me.

    Except that your model has a bit more aura of mystery with the glasses.

    What you come as a progression should be interesting.



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    I can see what you mean about him looking like Dr nefario. I'm actually doing a revision on the overall design, I like the characters facial proportions but i don't like the overall look and feel. Posting more soon.



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    MY current update on my character so far, C&C always appreciated





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    new lighting and over all atmosphere.



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    Tried a new lighting, may have to rethink it thou. Thoughts?
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    Cool idea and love his glasses. If I have to be completely honest, I think the lighting with SSS effect on the ears is the best. It's a bit dark so if you can brighten it up a bit and it'd be a solid piece. Mostly because it reveals a nice depth that I feel got lost in the last one - you can also re-position the light to get the depth back - it would work too I think. That's just my thought.
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    Hello, sorry for the late reply. I do love the SSS on the ears and the overall look.(darker image)
    i'll try brightening it up and do some more compositing .

    Thank you for the feedback.
    cheers



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    this a cool design! I prefer the second composition. I would add more colour to the lips, cheeks and nose, and a bit of spec on the lips, nose and brow and he will really pop!



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