project old house : suggestions and criticism ?

Hello. I just finished my last animation and I want to show you what I have achieved. In this animation i tried to learn a lot of new things,such as :

-) manuel bastioni lab
-) volumetrics volume scattering
-) IES data lamps
-) image (sequence) as planes
-) hair tool addon
-) glass shader
-) substance painter texturing
-) command line render script generator
-) cloth weaver addon

I don’t know how well I have applied these features,You can judge better than me and you can make criticism to help me improving my skill…

video file : https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_vrhf_PTNauVFpWN3VUMkZWbmMzTXZuQWs1SFFMSTdlSllv/view

blender file : https://drive.google.com/open?id=1gK4iF8eZJhLBfTiv8gdqhMfduqJtDQAp/view

thanks.