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    Ferrari 812 Superfast Render Critique [WIP]

    Hello,


    I will appreciate your thoughts on this project below. Please post the things you like or dislike. I will try my best to reply and improve the project.
    Thanks Again, Enjoy!


    For Full-Res links [Recommended]: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1oP...873MZJIxh6BXKj

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    These are renders after some touchups in GIMP [for reflections].


    I will also render and upload the closeups and interior scenes and also one with an HDRi. Currently working on the interior right now.

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    The paint material used was of Mike Pan's which had all the imperfections to make the paint look real. The paint had orange peel, metallic flakes and clearcoat which emulated a real world example.
    Last edited by SK0441; 04-Feb-18 at 01:24.



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    I think a rim light and a less abrupt transition in the BG would help


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    The first 6.5 mins of this vid might help

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    Well. What I uploaded right now is a studio render and i will render the model in many different setups. Thanks for the suggestion. Currently mapping the interior.
    Last edited by SK0441; 03-Feb-18 at 10:00. Reason: Amd > and



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    Update on progress:

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    Woaah!

    You're getting there man!


    Can't wait to see what the whole thing looks like.
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    Thanks bruh. Heres another one. Full 4k 3840*2160 and it takes a lot of time. Enjoy!

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    Looks even better on monitor. This is transparent background so that i can choose the floor color later on. thanks for the video and suggestion.
    Last edited by SK0441; 03-Feb-18 at 11:41.



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    Okay here's the image after final render:

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    Let me know if I should change the background.

    Full res (couldnt render 4k but 1440p): https://drive.google.com/open?id=1ie...SuWlljfpIgS7hh



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    I think the BG should be darker.
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    Okay after the bg change:

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    It's a bit better but,

    I'd make it a bit dark and add a vignette, to shift the focus from the background, to the car
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    This is way better:

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