Mr.Bee

This’s one of my latest characters, created for a client,
Shaded, textured and modeled inside of Blender,
Opinion, please? also, critique it if you wish! :–)
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Another version of this one, supposed to be a separate character, that’s what the client wanted,
Critiques/opinions are really appreciated. :–)
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I like the style! My main critique would be in the nose/mouth area. It looks pretty flat and I think both the hole of the mouth and the nose could benefit from more depth. Also it kind of looks like he is dirty around his mouth because of the brown. Perhaps it can be toned down a bit? Good job either way! :slight_smile:

You’re totally right, specially with the part when it comes to texturing the mouth, that’s something I unfortunately do lack, I always had the thought of ‘‘Having a tablet’ll improve my texturing skills’’ do you think that I’m right? or it actually has nothing to do with having a tablet? And yeaaah, thank you so much for writing something about my work, it really motivates me to post more stuff here! :–D