I know thereís a separate Animation forum, but I am looking for serious feedback, so I hope itís okay to post here.

Iíd love to hear your thoughts on anything, including video editing.

I do NOT aim for photo-realism. I DO aim for succinct communication, focus on concepts, simplicity, and minimal distractions. So I avoided the temptation of having a space-image background, 3d logos, and other cool things.

Iím using: Blender 2.79 and its VSE.

https://youtu.be/ruEBE5oyjBc

https://youtu.be/AowtGDM9naU