Hey guys, i’ve seen some incredible works on this site. I feel kind of nervous putting my film on here. It’s not as advanced in animation as most of the works I’ve seen on here. I’m wondering what you guys think of it. Please give me ur honest feedback. I hope you enjoy it.
We see that we have worked hard…although it seems very much a pre-visualization… :o
The editing and camera moves are great, maybe a bit long…
I honestly think that there’s great potential but, if I were you, I would start with something less complicated so you can concentrate on image quality…
However we see the worst around 
…I hope I did not write howlers… :o
Si vede che ci hai lavorato molto, anche se sembra molto una previsualizzazione…
Il montaggion e le inquadrature sono splendide, forse un pò lungo…
Onestamente credo che ci sia del grosso potenziale ma, se fossi in te, comincerei con qualcosa di meno complicato così da poterti concentrare sulla qualità delle immagini…
Comunque si vede di peggio in giro…
Spero di non aver scritto degli strafalcioni in inglese :o
Davide
I second the above;
Watching the intro, the music, editing and camera angles did actually give me that same feeling I get when I’m watching the intro to a feature film.
However, I felt it dragged on a bit. I think I might have been more inclined to watch the rest if there was speech (which is often a lot more hastle then it seems worth), or some more interesting imagery.
I’m currently working on a film in my spare time, and after working for months I have two scenes, and 1 five-second clip completed. These things take time, and I’m guessing you don’t have a team of workers behind you.
Keep at it 