@ Casio23 - yeah I see what you mean, I will go through the whole movie taking this into account.
@ zeffii - I read on about Kerning and it was nothing i knew anything about. Thanks, would have been bad to let such a small thing slip by. It’s a easy fix I will do. The camera at 5:30, that part is something I am still working on, I feel it’s not apocalyptic enough. I’m trying different solutions but you are right, that camerawork don’t cut it. And no, the intro don’t need to be that long, I should get to the interesting parts quicker.
@ lazerblade - English is not my first language and I guess that is to blame for some of the simplicity of it. Also a long time ago before I got a proper voice for the narrator I was planning on only using subs (my own voice sucks). Then I had to cut down on words, they would not fit in a readable scale on top of the animation. I got hold of a guy who do voiceovers for a living and he was kind enough to do it for free. I would feel very bad to ask him rerecord it for me. But I do agree, what you wrote sounds a hell of a lot better. I might have to ask him if I can get it that much better in more places.
@draguu - I also feel the story is lacking somewhat, I got myself to blame for not planing out enough before starting to animate. Before I knew it I passed the point of no return. I will not make any big changes to the story, instead I will try to make the most of it
Thanks everybody for you helpful input in this. I was not sure about posting this in this state, my plane was to show as little as possible only to dazzle you with a finished product in the end. But I see now that it was necessary, you guys see thing I newer thought of.
I encourage you to be hard on me and help this animation become awesome.