Tried to make somekind of mtv spot “look like” for my school audio and visual art festival!
played with randomnes of shape keys love to hear some feedback. (btw titles are greek but not the point)
Well, it’s an interesting sequence. One thing I’d suggest is that the timing needs to be smoothed-out just a little bit to make it coincide more with the key-points of the music … the moves ought to be choreographed, if you will, to the music. Another fine point is that, I think, at no point should we see a completely motionless frame.
(In fact, the motions need to scrupulously follow the apparent speed and direction of each swing that this object makes, giving us at least a subliminal sense of its weight and mass.)
These are things that could be addressed in the already-rendered video, just as it is, with some very careful editing … literally clipping out frames; fractions of a second.
It might feel like you are “polishing brass” when you do this. Takes more time than you think it should, makes you focus on “tiny” details a lot more than you maybe want to, but … oy! … how it shines when you’re through!