A Buildin In a Building

Artwork Focused Critiques
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here is a building I’m working on… It is a lunchroom inside of a production plant.

This is the architects auto cad version that I used as a visual reference:

http://imgur.com/YFUy5xG

Here is my first go at it:

http://imgur.com/fKYGxZX

my second:

http://imgur.com/o2w2uxW

And where I’m at now:

http://imgur.com/QuRizTi

Im not sure how close to realistic it is, but any thoughts on problems you see with it would be appreciated. (feel free to tear it apart, honesty will not hurt my feelings)

2

I don’t understand why the windows are blurred. it kind of makes it look like brushed polished steel. I think for realism you should actually model the background in.