A simple scene for CG class....

Hey Guys,

  Been working on this for a little while now. It a recreation of a scene I did last year for my final, and decided I want to rework alot of it and make it look better. Its my first post whooohoo!!!!

http://members.cox.net/dannyboy3/Blender%20Images/scene.jpg

comments, concerns, thoughts for improvement?

~Danny

Nice work! It seem that with the red lights on the wall that the over all ambient color should have more of a redish cast to it though, but maybe the window is the strongest light source.

great work there. Maybe all that is needed is a bit more work on the light. a bit more emitting look, at the moment just looks like smoke =).

Also on the window maybe extrude it out to give it a bit of depth.

great though can’t wait to see the finished product, the candles table etc are all spot on!

Very nice modeling. The lighting needs work, there is light that couldn’t come from the window, the candles or the red lights. If you put a dim light hangin from the roof, that light would be explained. It’s looking very promising.

Goo

That´s nice! Maybe add a halo around the calndelfames, and turn tha transperancy down?