A Simple Still Life

I am looking for some constructive criticism of my latest piece.

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I like the texturing and the modeling. If thats a wine glass it looks a little too big and bulky to me, maybe a longer slimmer stem and thinner glass? Just my opinion though, looks very convincing otherwise.

Hey thanks. Yah, I did have a little trouble getting the glass to look right, Ill take your advice

I like the tomato and cucumber, the cutting board, and the knife. But I can’t tell what the flat green disk is-Pita maybe, or the bluish black things-blueberries or olives? I also agree with @TonyC3D about the wine glass. Material is off, and it’s a bit too thick. Good start!

I like the cutting marks detail on the board.

I can’t see the background through the wine glass… are you using Cycles?
This images begs for Cycles if your not…
I have suggestions for makeing your Glass look right if your using Cycles…

very well done texturing on everything… I love that tomato and the cucumber… nice… mmmm…
(man now I’m going to have to make a sanwhich…)

Haha thanks man. Yes, it was rendered with cycles and I tried everything I could think of to help make the background visible through the glass. Any advice you have would be greatly appreciated.

Yep…
what I would suggest is to go to this site…


and see his tutorial on rendering glass it really clears up a bunch of issues with it…