I like it so far. The dome strikes me the most.
The flames are always a problem.
Here’s a tip or two.
Start with a cube and sub-divide it once the play with Sub Surf until you get a shape you like. then leave edit and duplicate it.
On one add material and texture. The texture will be a liniar blend with the XY flipped. Play with the colors until you get an orangish/yellow top and a blue bottom. On the other one make it particles for that touch of flicker.
After a few hours you will have a great looking flame
The next step is to save it to disc, then to CD then to your friends computer then to your girlfriend and maybe even to a stranger’s who has a trustworthy looking face. That way you never have to go through it again.
That part was just because I am a smart alec, but it is difficult and I would be glad to e-mail my model so you can play with it, if you would like.
The tut is no longer available. I got it from a guy named Manau (?) who if anyone remembers Blendermania, was truly the reigning master with Blender.
At any rate, Hope this helps.