Hello, Finished my last work, small abandoned farmhouse,
software used blender
Comments and advice much appreciated
Loris
For other works my links are the following:
https://www.instagram.com/mylittle3dworlds/
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCL4r7QkGYOnmS2XAudmzrOg
This is a great image!
In my opinion, some more contrast between colors would be quite pleasant - if the roof’s red was more saturated it would probably work well with the green of the surrounding vegetation.
Super cool !
Everything works really well, models , composition, materials, everything is great !
Thats a great picture! Congratulations!
Hello and tks! i prefer pastel shades at the moment. Dont like so much images or textures too saturated!
Tks for stepping by"
Loris
tks so much 
Beautiful style of art. I could hang this on my wall!
I really like this image, and it’s very well made. However you’ve asked for critique so there are a couple of things I noticed. The roof tiles seem to be very big, especially noticeable on the part of the building at the right side of the image. The roof of the building at the rear looks a bit strange, like new tiles (quite shiny) with clumps of grass scattered around. I think the ‘grunge’ needs to be a bit more complex and widespread. And this is really nitpicking but the sunflowers at the back seem a little too uniform. A bit more random size and orientation would be good. Overall the detail is excellent.
tks so much ^ ^
Grazie mille ^ ^
Hello! I waited a little bit to answer you x’ with the phone was a little more complex.
btw, TKS SO MUCH!!! Ts for your great feedback!
U’re right on roof tiles too big, for the far building it’s only a texture map (buildings in the front got real geometry tiles). I’ll change sunflowers too (for me are also too little dense…).
Today and tomorrow i’ll try to apply all the corrections and i’ll upload a new pic.
Another time, tks so much!!!
Loris
I featured you on BlenderNation, have a great weekend!
can someone help me some free addons not working in blender?
Great work!
Wow is fantastic! congratulations.
This will make a good fit in dystopian, the building textures are good, maybe the ceiling can use a little bit of hole.
This is a spectacular image! Since you explicitly asked for feedback - I hope I don’t overstep here. I have done a quick Photoshop Camera Raw Color Correction:
Otherwise the image is, imho, almost perfect - quick feedback:
I think if you shift the light direction a bit the image will be even more effective:
If the back of the house is in shadow against the sky andn the front of the roof is in the bright sunlight, i think you’ll get a a nice contrast.
Again if I overstepped in meddling with your work, sorry about it.
All the best,
Jonathan
