Ad Astra

If you really want something, sooner or later you will achieve it.
Just keep on trying, work hard and never give up.
Per Aspera Ad Astra - It is my motto.

What do you think?
Full project here:

I think it is great that you based your art work on your personal motto, and that the render is ment ot say something.
The image itself however could be improved at some points.
There is not a lot going on in the scene, and the things that attracted my attention are the walls, not per se the person.
I think this is because of the strong rim light which somewhat blurres the person.
Also It feels like there is a lack of detail, maybe if the camera would be lower to the ground and would show some rubble or dust the image would be more interesting.