It’s looking quite nice! The lighting and texture looks pretty good to me.
but I can’t help to make a little more remarks, the skins has some dark areas that might be caused by texture or mesh shadow, I am not sure, but I highlight it in the picture below.
The eyes might be a bit bright, or maybe it’s because of the eyelash is too dark, it makes the eye white and eyelashes black contrasty, maybe you can adjust both of them to make the color look more harmonious with the skin around it…
You might also want to add some bump texture to the lips to breakup the highlights and add some details.
The hair in front also has some obvious intersection, I am not familiar with Blender’s hair… I just started learning recently, but maybe you can add more strands or break down that area to more hairs and do more adjustment so they don’t intersect.
The nose hole there still doesn’t looks natural…
Sorry if those are a mouthful, but those are what I would tackle if I am working on this model, don’t take it seriously, just some ideas hope they helps… Cheers!