Aditya`s room

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This is my first serious work. It is titled Aditya`s room because it is based on the hostel room which belongs to my friend Aditya. Hope you like it and please tell me what do you think about it…

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Love it very atmospheric :slight_smile:

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love it just a few things:

  1. the label on the leftmost book is in comic sans - which maybe works for a candy bar but does not go with books, and its the most overused font in the world (along with papyrus and brush script)
  2. the water bottle looks a little too milky
  3. the table cloth needs a texture i would say
  4. again the book - the pages look like 1 solid cube, what you could do is take a stripey image and displace the cube with thst image
  5. also, the other books need pages
    but it is very well done and just needs some little fixes :slight_smile:
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thanks for critics…

i am totally agree with them. and i am doing things better now…