Adjust and improve tech animation

I have created this animation to explain a project I’m working on:

As you can see, the crude basics are there, but I could really use some help making it smoother, dynamic, more interesting, etc.

I’m happy to accept as little or as much help as you can spare!

If you are able to help, you would be very welcome to use the improved animation in your reel, and I’ll also give you the best reference I can!

Project files can be downloaded here: