I edited your thread title. Please refrain from the extra comments in your titles. It is what gets everyone going on you. So, please just don’t from now on. Thanks.
As for the image, it seems to be way too lumpy. If it is flowing chcolate, then it would have a fluid like texture to it. Based on the form that you have, that is the intent. So I would actually reduce or get rid of the bump map completely.
See this reference here for what I mean:
Colour and lighting ar actually well done in this one. Shadows are nicer and not as sharp, which works well.
Now, as has been stated before, maybe try and push away from the use of procedurals going forwayrd. Try and make some of your own textures or download some good high resolution, seamless ones from the web and utilize them in different ways. Also, the obvious use of the Photoshop “Difference Clouds” in the backgrouns, or possible Blender procedural cloud texture, is really disctracting and does not fit with the structure you have for the chocoltae. Not sure what may have been better to use here. Maybe nothing but a clean, white background would work?
And also, (back to Moderator mode), please don’t turn this thread into a flame war again people. And that means everyone. Thanks again