Aldhissla, Great Warrior of Valhalla, Wolf Protectress

Heya blendies !!

I finished my pic ! It represent a Viking Warrior with a wolf in a forrest at night :slight_smile:

Here is the pic 1280*960 :
-EDITED : NEW VERSION OF THE PIC-

I Love Blender !

Bye
WizardNx.

WOW :o

Nice stuff there

Crits: Just the weird fog…

Keep on rolling :wink:

Waz

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I’ve redone the fog and the front leg of the wolf.

Bye
WizardNx.

Wow :o . That looks great. I really like the way the night looks, and the trees are really nice. I think the fog doesn’t look right though. It looks fake compared to the rest of the picture.

cute wolf… %| :-?

lets see some ferocity. :< her left arm has some weird deformation… looks REALLY skinny

otherwise, cool 8)

realy goog mate!, thumbs up!
make the wolf more vicious!

It’s neat, but the wolve looks like a happy puppy, not like an animal that wants to tear you guts appart.

Martin

I like it very much…

Really good modelling work, on both the woman character and the wolf…

Just a suggestion, the moon on the upper left is just a “shinny sphere”… I think it would look much better if you woulld apply a real image-texture of the moon on it, to add some more realism in your scene…

Good job…

:smiley:

Spyros.

Ok yeah you’re right… LOL… The wolf is more a “happy pet dog” than a savage wolf… I’ll do a better work of modeling on it !

Timonides wrote

Just a suggestion, the moon on the upper left is just a “shinny sphere”… I think it would look much better if you woulld apply a real image-texture of the moon on it, to add some more realism in your scene…

Concerning the moon, this effect was wanted, I wanted a kind a light flow from the moon to have a kind of mystic atmosphere and I wanted it more as a light source that a “simple moon”.
You should know that I preferred to privilege the mood and the global impression before the realism. :slight_smile:

Bye and thanks for your comments
WizardNx.

Really nice work. Good composition, excellent modelling. Obviously, as you stated, you prize the atmosphere.

Couple of suggestions: A little more contrast in the lighting. Some variation in the wolf’s coloring. Right now he’s all one shade, and no matter how good the model is, it makes him look like an unpainted plastic model kit. Her cape seems to be rather lo-poly; the curve has several sharp angles on it.

ah Valhalla. The land of paradise for viking warriors… perhaps you should name her Valkyr, not valhalla, so she is one of the gods who picks whichviking are deserving of eternal battle/

perhaps you should name her Valkyr, not valhalla

She’s not named Valhalla… it’s just written “great warrior of valhalla” :slight_smile: In fact I begin to name the woman Aldhissla but it was the name of the wolf (wich is a she-wolf). So I didn’t find any name for her.

There is a complex contexte and story for this picture.

Bye
WizardNx.