Looks great. I like the style, but there is something wrong around the eyes. I think it’s to dark or maybe edges are to sharp. I don’t know. You could show it from some different angles. Overall it’s good character design.
More images please
Good to start with, say do a render with the same scene and lighting but this time
give a look, you know, his like talk to some one or on the look-out!
thanks for posting.