American cafe

Hi,
I thought I should make a real scene for once. I was sort of inspired by Edward Hopper when I created this. The only likeness to any Hopper painting is the diner/cafe as the center of attention, all the rest from my imagination.
It is rendered with Blender internal, Of cores there are areas of improvement but I call it done.

Hope you like it.


I like it very much:) i allways wanted to try and do a scene like this but never mangaged too… Very Well done:)

Well done on the ambiant lighting, a very nice touch indeed.

Cool scene! The gravel looks a bit odd though, as if it was randomly dumped onto the concrete. It seems like the ground should be dirtier if it has rocks on it.

Good work!

Thanks for your comments.It was really hard to do a convincing dirt road so I finally had to give it up and move on. So that is a part that need improvement, but that will probably have to wait until some later project.

Wow, really nice, looks ready to be put in an animation. Btw, is there a guy standing at the door? He looks kind of creepy… lol

Yes actually there is a guy there. I put him there to look like an old-time gangster or spy, thats why his not that obvious.

Oh, haha I like that idea

Love this!
Few points to critic: the glass/interior needs a bit of something extra, I’m not sure if it needs more transparency or reflection or more inside light but now looks a bit milky. You should look for a good reference image to get he right look. Another thing, the cacti lit by the outdoor light are a bit distracting, all focus should be on the inside. The texture on the wall doesen’t look too well.
Gangster and mood are perfect :slight_smile: