50 samples cycles render, i really hope to hear your critics, not very happy with the result i got, maybe you could point out some errors i made or help me improve it by adding something…
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I think a little touch of bokeh would help out a lot, especially with that sus purple right there. My eye personally thinks it’s weird that blue is just standing there, staring at orange while his half-body is still standing somehow. I feel like it would give better motion if blue was running away if the orange body was still standing (or contrarily leave blue standing and tip over orange). Maybe also darken the foreground (where purple is) just a bunch of scattered thoughts to try out.
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You could add some steam to emphasize the danger in the scene and a bit more irregular lighting. Some laser lines or a broken electrical cable with some sparks could also add to the story. 
Are those cracks in the front floor? Somehow they look raised. Maybe you would have to invert the bump mapping?