Hello!
I need crit on specific shoots in this animation : http://www.open-class.org/20001_1193.avi : the hanging, eating, in lab sleeping ,tv … crit every movement please ,
this is a block animaton and i’m doing the real one at the moment and re-blocking these into better animations
ps: the student is writing from right to left, this is because we do so in arabic . 
thanks for paloman’s rig !
Very nice, busy busy busy!
Anyway, I’m only saying this because you said to crit every movement… but there is a small skip in the animation of the left arm from the 0:12 to 0:13 second mark. Personally not a huge problem. Just looked a bit out of place.
thanks rob
i fixed the sleeping animation
today will fix
eating meal animation and TV animation
will animate a run before/after each hanging in the air …
tomorrow the rest … etc etc.
wish me good luck!
i will seperate each animation into it’s own .blend to ease my job
i fixed the eating animation and amended the timing … for the actions
download the 0.5 mega file
http://www.open-class.org/projects/student_short_film/eating_p.avi
also used constraints to grab and put things!
i will continue doing the other animations
so people will criticize it 
now will fix the labaratory scene
hi
i realy like the animation and the way the concept is worked out.
however i wou change the toothbrush animation in a more up and down movement or left to right movement
and the second thing is i wouldent move the head to much when he eats.
but good work
however i wou change the toothbrush animation in a more up and down movement or left to right movement
ok…
and the second thing is i wouldent move the head to much when he eats.
good crit, thanks … 
the lab animation is nearly completed
download the 0.5 mega file : Lab preview
http://open-class.org/projects/student_short_film/lab_p.avi
enhanced it a bit!
download the 0.5 mega file : Lab preview
http://open-class.org/projects/student_short_film/lab_p2.avi
it is more alive now
what do you thin of my animation right now?
download the 0.5 mega file : Lab preview 5
http://open-class.org/projects/student_short_film/lab_p5.avi
download the 0.5 mega file : Lab preview 7
http://open-class.org/projects/student_short_film/lab_p7.avi
pretty sweet
two things to change:
when the thing explodes make him move/bend back more abrupt.
the motion is to smooth.
hold for one second the the shock n awe pose
and then abruptly as well move into the part where he slams his arms down.
also maybe the in the movie right hand can get a bit more of a motion
it feels to stiff.
I thing with fixing the timings it will be good.
thanks cekuhnen, i will keep this in mind.
None of those links to the animations are working for me.
http://www.open-class.org/projects/student_short_film/eating_p.avi
becomes
http://www.forum.open-class.org/projects/student_short_film/eating_p.avi
and so for the other links.
ps: I don’t have time to alter them now, will do later…
forget about the above links, here is a youtube videos
what do you think?
very nice!
but i wonder why u call it student suffering?
its normal routine of every student. lol and that lab smoke explosion happened to me in real life! lol 
wasnt ble to see very clearly that day!
