I did this right after the last post but didn’t fell like posting it too fast. Anyways feet are real bad. Critz are welcomed
More contrast, please! (use soft pencils for dark areas, apply more pressure, adjust curves in an image manipulation app, or any combination of these).
Perspective and proportions are quite good, but it’s hard to say what’s going on.
Not sure how I feel about the outline of the face, again! It’s certainly an interesting pose, though 
I agree with thorwil on the shading. Only thing I need to add is that make your transitions smoother!
nice, i take it thats a bomb or something she is sitting on, nice.
she’s hot…