hi!
this is my current work.
i start this 4 month ago.
critisism about modelisation and style is welcome!
Very nice modelling, although some parts seem out of keeping.
The crane section seems too bulky compared to the scale of the rest of the ship. It might be better to make each strut from a framework construction.
The pistons do not seem to have any hydraulic pipes to them on the crane.
Some areas are still a little plain.
Can’t currently see anything else wrong…
Very nice model so far, keep it up.
Alex
I cannot but echo what the guy above me said, except to elaborate from my point of view. (POV IS MINE, HA!)
It seems like you lazied out with the crane. It looks really choppy compared to the rest of the model, it doesn’t have bolts or anything like that. Maybe it’s still WIP, I dunno, but it still degrades the wholesome quality of the model.
It also seems to suffer from a “comical thickness” problem, which makes it cute but the rest of the picture seems to be completely different. Consistent style is always important. EDIT: Well, now that I gave the pics another look, it seems what you are aiming at. Still, the crane seems to deviate from the rest of the pic style wise.
The cage behind the cockpit seems to be suffering from similar problems, and those turbines look quite flimsy. But they’re not as much of a bother than that crane there.
But good detailed model, congrats.
think you very much for so constructive reply!
indeed, the crane need to be remake.
i will rework on this model this week.
think’s !