hey, I’m back, thank you to those of you who helped with the apartment, now I’m working on the hall way for the building, I’m not rly happy with it yet and would love some feed back. for back story its a low income apartment building in Hawaii. I included the apt below too
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Interesting… trash on the main floor… and the building for living seems to have more industry building concrete beams but then also a old wooden banister to the cellar ??? But i do not have visited hawaii yet 
So here is my “impression” or two cents… it may help to make you more happy… but i hope not to make you sad… 
…also sometimes oneself just do not see this after hours of looking at it…:
The hallway do look a little odd… there seems to be one (green) perspective:
…but the left door ( because of it angle ), the light shadow line ( top left red ) do disturb the perception of this somehow. Also the power box seems to not proper aligned to the wall and some of this disturbance.
The “cracks” (red; and i left one ou in the t top left) are all teh same… the texture on th efloor do have strange marks (dotted red) which also somehow disturbs the 3D perception.
The mix of brick wall and plasteing is to “wide” the plaster seems to “disappear” to transpareny (??). also on the left bootom some of the “greeble” seems to disapear on a straight line…
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thank you so much for your help. I agree with you and am working on it right now, I totally had tunnel vision from looking at it for so long. however thank you for taking the time to illustrate the issues and etc. I truly appreciate the help