Apple MacBook Pro - What can I improve/focus on?

Hi guys, I’m new here. I 've been using Blender for 1 year on and off and I ended up loving it so I wanted to finally improve on my modelling and texturing skills. I made an Apple Macbook pro to practice both. Here are some renders:

Here is the .blend file for anyone who wants to take a closer look:
I used references to model it. Anyway, I would like to know your opinion on how the model is, on what I should improve and on what I should pay more attention next time. I’m open to any critisism you have since I want to improve! Thank you!! :grin:


Looks good! The only thing I can see that needs improving is the shape of the keys. They appear to be sort of rounded off at the horizontal edges (kind of like a pillow) whereas I think they should have a sharper edge, and maybe be a bit thinner. Here’s a reference image:
Hope that helps!

Thanks a lot that really helps! You are right the keys are a bit too rounded, making the edges sharper would improve it a lot. And also as you suggested I have to make them thinner, I totally forgot to use reference for their thickness. Thanks for your feedback it helped a lot!

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