Arch Viz Practice Bathroom

Artwork Focused Critiques
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Hi,
I made this little bathroom scene in order to improve my arch viz skills.
I was focusing on the lighting and shading so I put less time into the composition.

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I would be happy if you have any tipps for me :smiley:

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I can see you focused a lot on the lighting
and that exactly seems too much here- light
and shadows are what i miss

(but maybe It’s just me a Batman fan :wink: )

and I would make the shot wider, the tub is like jumping out of it
pull the camera a bit further back

I quite like the rough towel , well pulled off

keep blending

Jarek D(DJ)

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“Well, now it’s time to focus on the composition.” (And you’ll find that this helps your lighting to look better.)

The materials and the decoration are actually quite nice – this looks like a wealthy playboy’s bathroom – but the composition needs reconsideration, I think, in two main ways:

  1. Lift the camera up and show us that there really is a tub there.
  2. Move the camera to avoid a “bulls-eye” composition. This will help us to see the fixtures – or anything that is now pointing directly toward the camera – but it will also more-closely match the point of view with which any human is likely to look at this place.
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I was trying to avoid make wide angle shot because that’s what people advised me
Maybe I carried it too far :sweat_smile:
I will take care of the shadows next time
Thanks for the tipps :slightly_smiling_face:

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Thanks for your reply, and the compsition tips
I will put more afford into the composition, maybe I should use the composition guide lines :smile: